Steady she sways as the wind screams past her thinking mind,
Taking in a view of the whispering sea,
Telling her heart's tales,
Parading her happiness to a keeping bystander.
Ever does the ocean scream the secrets it's been told,
Yet no one takes the time to read its moans.
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Written March 6th, 2005
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ashiteru
I like this a lot!! This is Meg's friend Angel and Meg says "Hi, I love this and I love you cause you're kewl and I love you my little friend!" I really like this especially the last line. It just ya rocks. It's like 8 something in the morning so don't mind my lack of actual critquing. I'm not what you can term a morning person. But I really do like the poem. I'm going to quit my rambling. ttyl
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One thing I don't get: who is the 'keeping bystander' and what does that mean? I read it in a bad way just now at first so if you could tell me what it really means I'd appreciate it.
By the way ROCK ON BOY!!!!!!!!
DO YOU LIKE JIMI HENDRIX???
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Ah this is awesome, mysterious and I wish it was longer! The secrets of the sea, what an inspiring thought, you've probably set me off dreaming of the sea again now.
I just thought, I wonder if it's the moon that told the sea it's secrets?!!
Edited on Mar 26, 1:07 p.m. because ''. -
Amazing Daryl, just absolutely amazing.
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It has a beautiful sound. I've read it quite a few times. I don't really get it. But that's just me. I enjoy reading it. I enjoy the sound.
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