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Orgasmic Writing

Missing image
~Gregg Rowe~
co-written with Sylvie Cornez
TAPS (THE ATTIC POETS SCHOOL)
August 26, 2002

writing poetry

is like having good sex


you practice

forever

and remember the good ones:


the inhibited

the unprotected

the release


Author notes

Sylvie writes first line (italics), I write the second (bold).  We wrote this while we were vacationing in Malbaie, Québec way up north towards Charlevoix.  We ventured out onto the St Laurent River to do some whale watching.  It was one of my best summer vacation in years. She is one of my angels in my life.  It was where I broke out more in my painting techniques.  She's quite the teacher.   Greggg  
Written February 8th, 2002

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  • goddesskevauna
    June 11, 2005
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    That is pretty good here! Leaves me speechless.

  • Sweet Briar
    March 13, 2005
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    Oh that is so true lol You and your Friend Sylvie did a very fine job collbrating with each other. The write overall is written with grace the words flowed well, and to me I hardly see that when some people write humor. They think of if it is humor they can mess up the flow of the write. But you never once skipped a beat in this. And thank you for the chuckle.

    Jenn