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Short time

anticipation
momentary ecstasy
vivid memories

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Written March 6th, 2005

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  • a u r a
    March 7, 2005
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    wow-may it be everlasting absolutely sensational


  • queen Moderators member
    March 6, 2005
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    Sounds kind of sexy to me Very cool