by ~Gregg Rowe~
His golden breath
brushed upon my lips
his slender hands
fly at the speed of light
flutters across my nipples
a spring river escapes down my body
He kneels, whispering
his desires for comradeship
fingers dabble at the
buttons of my jeans
I disappear into the night skies
watching the falling stars
as he swallows me
His shirt is wide open
I brush his olive skin
tease the nipples to erection
as he continues to tease
with his warmth
I have the need to release
as he cocks out his chest
to receive the warm seed
We relax in the tent
listening to the snow owls
anticipating
this evenings
sports match
is just beginning
Author notes
Written March 6th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- seduce me by d a f f o d i l.
300 points, ended May 12, 2005, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Great inmagenary, very discriptive, and well so what for gays, who cares? anyway, great write
and its not offensive at all.
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I thought this was a great write. It was a good way to express feelings and desires and since I'm secure in my own sexuality; I didn't find the gay imagery offensive at all. It was erotic and sensual with a lot of great descriptive imagery. Best of luck in the contest
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Nope, still cant get used to gay men have sexual contact (other than that i have no problem with them) But. was a great write. xxxxx
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hmmmm this was very interesting indeed, I'm never read a poem before of the erotica of a gay male, it was a very good poem one cannot fault that, the imagery was brilliant, great write, keep it up, love Romanee, xx
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well if he ending wasnt so damned suspensful i would like it alot more
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Eeeeeeekkkkkk! I, being a bisexual female, for some reason do not enjoy the erotica of the gay male... I is sorry! Aside from my personal feelings, if found your poem to be very descriptive and sensual. It just wasn't my taste. I thought that I would comment because it would be rude of me to just waste your hard-earned points... See ye Gregg.
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This is a well written and erotic piece. It has a nic e flow to it. The imigary is quite visual. I enjoyed reading yout write a whole lot. Keep up the good work.
~~~~Love and Light~~~~
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Very sensual, a lot of excellent visuals, it must have been a very interesting interlude as you wrote about it with great feeling, nice flow and I enjoyed reading this poem, all the best and keep up the good work
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