To the tune ~Some Enchanted Evening~ Mario Lanza~ Musical South Pacific ~ {3:03}.
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And if your were dying babe
I would surely find the cure
My life is all for you babe
And there is nothing left for her
I missed you from the morning
As dew fell from my eyes
I heard your silent warning
That saved me from her lies
Yet still the miles between us
And many days to go
I see you dreaming on the magic bus
Waiting for your next show
Will my letters get through?
And will you see the love
It’s only in the things we do
We do it all for love
As the nighttime comes upon you
And you lie in dreams of me
I hope you know our love is true
And our love shall set us free
In days of silent wonder
My dreams shall be for thee
Let no man put asunder
The love that sets us free
So cry and think about me
And wish the wishes true
I am coming I am now free
To do the things we’ll do
So in our dreams of yesterday
And in our real tomorrows
I hope you see I’ve found the way
To gently hold your sorrows
Yet still, I think you don’t know
How many years it’s been
Since I saw your minstrel show
And lost my life to sin
Where have we been not knowing
Each other’s love so rare
I always wept as you were going
I see you everywhere
And once again in silence
I’ll send these words on through
With dreams of love beyond that fence
That keeps my hand from you
Someday in the August rain
You will see my smile
And you will forget the stain
Octobers left awhile
Octobers left awhile
I bet you hear it everyday
How beautiful you are
And I too am here to say
You are a shining star
But words are only grains of sand
Swept off by winds of time
I only hope you understand
The reason of the rhyme
This is a story true my friend
And from a gentle heart
Could this story have an end?
Or is this just the start
So as I close this letter
I shall offer up a prayer
I hope that things get better
For my love is everywhere
When you feel the gentle wind
Or the wintry chill of dawn
Know I'll love you without end
Till the mountain, range is gone
And even if I'm far away
My love is there at hand
I am with you everyday
Always with the band
So laugh for me a song or two
For me, I sing the blues
If my song could get to you
It wouldn’t be bad news
You my friend are in each note
My humble guitar plays
And every word I ever wrote
Was made in loving ways
I'm an archer without arrows
And your touch I humbly seek
For my road quickly narrows
As I hold out through the week
I have told you all I could my friend
So in silence now I go
But my love for you shall never end
Until that final show
When my days are over
And to the other side I go
Where life’s a four-leaf clover
And all the truth we know
Maybe there I’ll see you
And maybe touch your hand
Maybe I can get through
And you shall understand
So if they’re ever be a tear
You need wiped away
Call on me and show no fear
For I’ll, be there right away
Author notes
"Show me your ways, O Lord, teach me your paths;
guide me in your truth and teach me,
for you are God my Savior,
and my hope is in you all day long."
Psalms 25:4-5
This song and hymn is to all I've ever loved.
This song is for your heartbeat my beloved.
A humble prayer for my beloved knight of the white light.
I pray my love will soothe you healing your heart in your time in your eyes.
Every time your sing this prayer my beloved think of us as we.
I shall love you my beloved knight for all of eternity.
Eternal love never dies. We are now one forever in our divine rhythm and rhyme.
“You’re a true love of mine”. I shall love you beyond the end of time.
My love is your golden chalice. Oh tenderly sip the rich port wines of you and I.
From your siren of the seven seas.
I will forever love thee.
I reach for you tenderly.
I sing to you oh so softly.
I bring you wreaths of garland flowers.
I stand as one with you inside our tower.
Let us reach higher than we’ve ever been before
As i wrap you as one in my wings of Je’tadore and Amour.
I shall love you forevermore.
As i wrap you in my wings of Je'tadore and Amour. ~
Written March 5th, 2005
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i really loved the poem, filled with love pouring off of this, thank you for entering. i'm keeping this one in mind. -heather
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I love you. Some say twice is twice as nice
~My Beloved Timothy~
May you eternally shine on and on~
I adore all your love songs. I will forever love you
Even if i don't know who is exactly who?
I love you, I love you, I love you,
Can you find it in your heart to forgive me?
I don't know who is who in Rock n' Roll
Little darling this is your heart your soul
I am only a little one but I’m found
In your sweet tender smiles all around.
My Heart Gently Weeps
Beatles
Look at you all
See the love there
That is sleeping
As my heart gently weeps
Look at you all
All the love that is sleeping
While my heart gently weeps
Look at the fall it still
Needs sweeping
As my heart gently weeps
I don’t know why
Nobody told you
How to unfold your love
They bought and sold you
I look at the world
I notice its turning
As my heart gently weeps
Still my heart gently weeps
I don’t know how you were diverted
You were perverted too
I don’t know how you were faltered
Know one altered you
I see the love there
That is sleeping
While my guitar gently weeps
Still my guitar gently weeps
No- no- no
No- no- no
No- no – no
No- no- oh- no-
Oh- oh—oh- oh
Hey- yeah- yeah
Yeah yeah- oh
I think I might have missed a world or two
This is from memory for you,
I really adore all the Beatles.
John was kind to me at the
Edge of seventeen.
Do you know what I mean?
I’m so busy
Have to run
Have to fly
Just wanna say Hi,
And that I’m thinking about you too,
Wrapped in colours and hues of neon blues
Love
Sharron
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Amazing\Full Of Love!
You are lovely as the words that flow from your sweet soul!
From me to you, beyond the blue, my angel eyes so true!
Eyes~~~~~~~~~~
Angel eyes
I see your lovely spirit
The way you flow
Like your the faucet
And words like water
Cleanse my soul
I dial 711
Just to hear your lovely voice
And as I read under the sun
I feel as though
I've made the choice
To walk the path
That light has paved
So God can carry all my sins
To wash away with tidal waves
Every road
Its love that mends
So know I read
With much delight
And as you lead
You shine so bright
Within the timeless galaxy
I feel your love shine upon me
I thank you for
Your endless love
That reaches across the seven seas
I only hope
That you know of
The heart of love I see in thee
Beyond the blue
Do you feel the breeze?
It's heavenly cords
I strum to thee
The angelic chimes, outside my door
With love I send forevermore
-Timothy
The
Poetic
Weaver
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I am continually amazed by the beautiful talent that you have. Just when I think you can't top yourself, you do come up with something even better. You are simply amazing. I wish I had your talent.
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is ur name angel really? lol cuz my name is angel! lol I love that poem! It had a lot of feeling and thought to it! I envy u! jk! I wish i was as good!
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I especially like the first two stanzas. They flow smoothly and their message holds together nicely. They would make a good song lyric.
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Yeah, the only thing that baffled me throughout this whole poem, despite the simple splendour and beauty of the poem.. was the existence of the word "thru", but you seem to have plead your case on that. Other than that, there are no complaints on my part, very awesome writing in this poem. Just keep doing what you are doing, you are a very audience-friendly poet.
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The perseverance and faithfulness to the love stands out
very clearly throughout the entire piece. When we love,
there really is next to nothing we will not do...and all
their pain we would gladly take upon ourselves if it
would save them just one moment of it...
touching!
UB
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This is nice, I bet it would sound great to music. It has very good rhythm and flow. Your choice of words and rhyme schemes are beautiful. Good job.
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Liked it a lot. Very ingenius. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations.
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Bravo much
Okay, you just have to stop Angel. You wrote yet another master with this one, and it's really making my work look desolate and boring. WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME SO?! I'm just kidding
. But seriously, whenever I read your work, I think to myself, "Dude, why can't you write more like her?" More often than not I get in a violent row with myself and create another poem off of it. So not only are you eclipsing my work; you're inspiring fights within my head that lead to poems. Thank you for writing this work; it's really good and I hope to see more of your work in the future.
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this is very beautiful work! keep writing!
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NoIQ for you I’m single! Who is Bob anyways? I don't recall his name. Do i know him? I don't think so. For when i see Justin time stops. And i feel his heartbeat as one deep inside of me. Oh one enchanted evening we shall dance and sing. I've seen your laughing eyes smile at me. I shall love you eternally. Who is Bob anyway?
The day you came my way you're all i could ever see. Your the reason why my heartbeats. You’re the only reason why I sing. Once enchanted evening we shall dance and sing. For this is a true love. This is beyond a mortal love. As i wrap you eternally in my wings of never ending love. Now just for you. Nought to make light of this Knight as Sir Bob, he has been kind and has done what he can. But tis you my Knight of the white light i earnestly seek your hand. I love you. I can't stop loving you. This will always be our heart song. In your travels far and wide. Just know i am always with you by your side. I knew the day that i met you. I knew in my heartbeat i was born for you. I knew that i will forever love you. I knew. As we sing songs to our one heart is where we both belong. " For my Lady" is the first rock n' roll song i learned to play on the piano. And i never even had the notes!
This is my all time favourite song of all time. Thank you! A thousand kisses deep i kiss you in my wings of peace.
"Once you have him, never let him go."
I just want you to know
How I feel and love you so
Just to end on a humours note for you
Bob is so low key about this whole thing
He laughs and says to me oh if he wants you
Just go ahead, he drives you right outta your head!
He does not mind. This is the divine comedy.
He is much to busy to be concerned with love and all this stuff
We dream and sing. And he doesn't have a clue that our love song is you.
He does not understand that you can love someone in a song.
And once upon a time neither did i.
As i soar and fly forever in your eyes.
For all of eternity i shall love thee.
My knight of the white satin nights
This is the illusion for us to see
As i bid you a warm hello in our wings of peace
Forever i shall love thee
Forever i shall be 'your lady'
Namaste Blessed Be
Take my hand take my heart and love its for free!
As i sing to you again and again i love thee.
All the best to you and yours forevermore
Let us sail away on our wings of Amour.
Know that thru eternity i shall love thee tenderly.
Time waits for no one my love
Forever i will wait for you.
I love you I love you I love you.
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OK -- LOL, then consider these my words to you for the day you ever become single
"Set sail towards the sun;
Feel the warmth that's just begun.
Share each and every dream,
They belong to everyone.
Oh I'd give my life so lightly
For my gentle lady.
Give it freely and completely
To my lady"
Moody Blues, "For My Lady" -- Perfect words for a beautiful angelic soul
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Namaste Blessed Be Sparky25
Love is the only reason why
Thru
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through
Translations for "thru" English-German
Translations for "thru" English-Spanish
Translations for "thru" English-French
2 entries found for thru.
thru P Pronunciation Key (thr)
prep. & adv. & adj. Informal
Through.
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“Some Enchanted Evening”
“Some enchanted evening, you may see a stranger
you may see a stranger across a crowded room,
an' somehow you know, you know even then,
that somewhere you'll see him again and again!
Some enchanted evening, someone may be laughing
you may hear him laughing across a crowded room,
an' night after night as strange as it seems
the sound of his laughter will sing in your dreams!
Who can explain it, who can tell you why,
fools give you reasons, wise men never try!
Some enchanted evening, when you find your true love
when you hear him call you across a crowded room,
then fly to his side and make him your own
or all thru your life you may dream all alone!
Once you have found him,
never let him go!
Once you have found him,
never let him go!”
kokomo.ca/earlyyears/someenchantedeveninglyrics.htm
~ from the 1949 Stage Musical "South Pacific"
Please notice in this Musical how they spell the word
thru…. I love you and thank you for your comment.
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Wow great great poem....I have never seen such a well written poem of that length! very very good -
Your meter and rhythm are excellent, this piece flows very well. A beautiful love poem, very nicely done.
I enjoyed this :-)
~ Wendy
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excellent
An excellent poem! You have a very good command of language, and the images that you used were really vivid. One comment on this to improve the poem: Check the spelling. I noticed on word in the first verse that didn't make sense, and another spot where you said "thru" not "through". I suggest you go through it again and try to see if you can tighten it up any more.
Overall, a really great work! very moving!
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This poem is amazing. I love your style of writing everything flows together so well that it seems so natural.
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I very well written poem. It flowed well and was written from within. I would also say it must sound good to music and sang. I enjoyed the read alot. Good job.
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GREAT
I loved the rythem, you had appropriate use of rhyme! I just flowed soooo well and I could feel your love this was simply beautiful! a work of art, very touching! I deffinently envy the subject of the poem, I can only hope one day someone will love me as much as you love this person! This si increadable I hope the person you wrote this for knows how lucky they are!!! this is fantastic! keep on writing!!!! -Nicci -
NoIQ yes i do try to play the guitar in which i have failed miserably. lol lol lol .
I don't have the rhythm thing down in my double-jointed fingertips. lol lol lol .
Until RAM i never head a love song. Until there was RAM i heard his love songs.
Across the universe i sing to Hugh, RAM and JUSTIN and all of you in loving verse.
Thank you. I was only thinking of the ones i dearly love. This is a song of love for my Beloved. Honestly i have to tell you i never owned a 'Beatles" album or CD in my life. But i could quote The Moody Blues backwards forwards and upside down for you. I don't know much about Rock n' Roll as you can see. I don't even have a Who Album or CD. But if you ask me anything about "The Moody Blues" this i can tell you. I love the Beatles I love the Who and and I love The Moody Blues.
Namaste Blessed Be to you and yours eternally...Thanks once more for singing to me and I promise one day everyone who has commented upon my songs i will joyful return the favours. Love, Sharron.
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very perfect poem it was really great i enjoyed reading it so much cuz it was meaningful and emotional and ,,,,,, so many things but i think u should write a snooz the can be repeted so many times or some times lol anyway and by the way my heart do noot have to be healthy it's healthy by it self !! lol c ye soon with so many good songs or poems !
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Angel, this is a beautiful rhyme, which you hold wonderfully despite the number of stanzas. The author comments suggest that it was written for someone special, and I envy whoever that person is. I only hope some day that someone writes as beautiful a lyrical piece for their feelings for me. I saw you marked this as being in the "lyrics" category, which left me wondering how you were hearing this in your own mind. That is the one form of poetry I simply have never attempted, because I feel I lack the musical skill to make it work. I did note your own periodic reference to music in the poem, including the reference to playing guitar. My personal favorite, though was the reference to "magic bus," since I happen to be old enough to love the Who. In the past, I have seen references suggesting you love the Beatles ("Rubber Soul" was the first album I ever bought). I suppose that could mean you were thinking of the "Magical Mystery Tour" too. Regardless, this was a lovely song/poem. Again, Namaste my dear poet
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I echo all the accolades already here. It is not a coincidence that your writing tie into Biblical teachings...all of life is...we usually don't take the time to see it.
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This is such a brilliant master piece you have written here. I am gald you can write such wounderful poems. I enjoyed reading it so much so well done!
Rock on!
katy
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Awesome!
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I bet this sounds real pretty set to music. Nice.
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a great reminder
Oh light and love of my life,
Remember I made you my very first wife!
My days have been filled with lots of strife,
I'd like to slice her with a sharp knife!
Yesterday I had a show,
My talents were received,
I am wearing a glow.
This ode to me has not gone unnoticed,
I know you penned it, especially for me,
I will call you today, I promise thee!
You sweet words of love and frienship devine,
Have touched me so, I cried and cried.
I'm counting the days til we meet again,
We'll laugh and share, include your mother in!
It's four short days and I'll be there,
Even though I wear no underwear!
I'll bring you all the love I can muster,
I'll hug you so tight, you'll be in a fluster!
I tell all your friends how much I love you,
Through the sands of time,
We'll be forever one as two!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
My undying love......you know who!
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Excellent bravo!!!
This is a treasure trove of tribute reinforcing untold promise eloquently orchestrated beautifully captivating rending me to the sea of tranquility I throughly enjoyed the sense of peace and lingering in the well of feeling... love, untold... yet to be lived exists in the hearts of others Beautiful piece awesome
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I love how it seems that you always tie a bible verse into everything you write. This is an amazing piece. I love it no less then any of your other poems. Keep up the good work!
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The person you wrote this for must be awfully special, a bit long, yet I enjoyed reading about how much you care for this person
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very sweet write- nice use of imagery here...but it is quite long. hehe- lovely write though!
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I just love your lyrics. You always use such poetic imagery and metaphors. This is another great write! I particularly like the lines "But words are only grains of sand / Swept off by winds of time". This entire piece is beautiful and full of hope and inspiration. Thanks for featuring this! Sheryl
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well written., but a tad long for my liking. but what do i know? no really, i know very little. im a failed poet.
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So enchanting those words...and may the one that it is directed at sing with each note and be elevated beyond what is reality and touch the wonders of what we can not see , but what definitely exists...a feeling , a love so deep that carries one beyond the realm of the here and now
Namaste, blessed be
Reenie xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Dynamicly Brilliant
Dear AngelEyes, your words have melted me deep within... There is something so “rare and so special about your art,” that most often "I simply feel at a loss for words!" How does one relate to "such words of giving (in love and care)?" Once again, you have overwhelmed by the brilliance of your “grace and creativity. This one is really special; “thank you...!” -
This is a very sweet and romantic poem. Is it dedicated to someone special in which you have lost and not found? Well keep on writing, for you have the talent to write, so use it well. Cheers!
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A very sweet poem here, but way to long, keep on writing.
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WOW!!! this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long, it was good though. i thought it was so very sweet. excellent work again!!!! keep up the great writes.
Til
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this is a good good right for it to be lyrical and the imaginative and describtiveness is greatly used and thats what i like. as for the bible contentness of this well dont take this as me being rude but i saw nothing of that at all...anyways its a good write;all the best to you
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Such a sweet write! I loved it my favourite has to be this part:
"And once again in silence
I’ll send these words on through
With dreams of love beyond that fence
That keeps my hand from you"
Such wonderful words. God bless you
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Wow...well.. that was long! But great write, well done
Keep it up X
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what can i say about this poem , just wonderful , you are truly a very talented word smith , you craft each line so well , to produce a great write , may be you could try one of mine let me know what you think .
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Thank you Max may be in the morning we can chat. This is very nice of you to share with me. Well this is a song that has many meanings. But it’s too late now to add or take away lyrics. But i thank you for suggesting this to me. Maybe if you heard this on the guitar or the piano the beat seems to fit with the song. But any suggestions you have will be deeply valued. All the best to you and yours! Maybe in the sweet morrow we can chat via Instant Messenger.
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~ My Beloved CookieZeal~ I have failed miserably at the guitar but i still try!
Somehow i can play the harp, the piano, dulcimer, clarinet, and the future flute.
If not for your loving graceful touch i would have not found this Holy Psalms
That belongs with this song of love in which we both sing
"When my days are over
And to the other side I go
Where life’s a four-leaf clover
And all the truth we know"
This is our love song here on terras shoes and a testament to our heavenly divine love forevermore. I love you thank you for the kindness and love you reveal to me. Namaste Blessed Be. Love & Light Sharron~
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Compassionate......patient........faithful!
Do you also play guitar? It might be the reason your works appear lengthy, but I know what lyrics can do!
I love the Psalm's reference! Bless you a lot...all over again!
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I liked. A little long but worth it.
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