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Unperfect

The one unperfected has risen above
the one I now say I do love
A world of logic, world of pain
World of horror has twisted it seems
Mixed together a dangerous combination
My heart beaten and broken with complication
Perfect isn't as it seems
and is but of my worst of dreams
Killing myself with dirt made of lies
Hiding from all I idolize
Still reality haunts my in my dreams
and nothing is perfect as it seems
Now not even with myself do I get along
what my heart thinks is right my mind knows is wrong
And in the darkest corner loams through out the day and in my dreams
A life that’s perfect is all but what is seems

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Written March 5th, 2005

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  • Yahiko
    October 18, 2005
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    Great job!

    ~Yahiko~
    I luv u!