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The High School ####- Up

i wish i was a real #### up
cause then i wouldn't care
if i let you down or made you cry
or if you laughed and stared

if i was a realy #### up then
life would be alright
caue i would just throw my life away
and live my day in night

if i were a #### up
then i would never be sad
i would never cry
and i will never wish i had

cause a #### up is
as a #### up does
and i #### up alot
but i am not one

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im sad
Written March 5th, 2005

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  • sweet deception
    March 17, 2005
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    Aw I'm sorry you're sad. I feel like I understand the sentiment of this really well... sometimes it sucks to have a conscience or a heart huh? But with out the downs you wouldn't know the ups. I hope things go better Very good write.