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I Want A Place

I want a place where I can empty my soul
I want a place where the secrets run from me
And become a river of blood and pain
Leaving me a girl pieced back together
No longer broken
But I'm afraid of what would happen
If my secrets were released
From the depths of my soul
So, I'll keep them tucked in the shadows
And let them rot away
Hoping that soon
I'll rot away, too

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Wrote this a couple of months ago, I think. Not sure what it is or what it means.
Written March 4th, 2005

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  • iamlost gold member
    March 18, 2005
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    super shexy

    wow, this is really really deep, the fear of exposing our inner shames and fears even to ourselves. great job, keep it up!


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    March 7, 2005
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    wow you never cease to amaze me..this is friggin amazing...keep up the great work, i will be looking forward to more..