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Locked-up Heart

Shattered for the millionth time
My heart that was once open
Is shut again
Locked up
I've thrown away the key
The key that was once used.

Always going to far
Emotions flying to high
Emotions used
Playing with my mind

Saying you love me
For the thousandth time
You think a kiss will solve it all

That people don't get hurt
When you treat them like a piece of dirt.
After you've thrown them to the curb.

You've ruined many people
Many dreams
Many relationships
That don't seem to matter at all

The truth hurts
The truth matters
Your life was full of lies

I will ruin you for the rest of my life
Degrade you like you did so many times
Ruin your reputation
Just like you did mine













Author notes

Joshua Ramsy, I hate you with all of my mortal being. If you fuck with me, or my friends, ever again. You'll pay for it. I'll make sure of it.

Well, for the rest of you - This person who I've known all of my life, who I actually had true feelings for, ruined many things. I think he is the first person whom I did love. It's all over with, now.

Give me honest feedback. I think I over used a few words. I'm going to write another peom about him.
Written March 4th, 2005

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  • Lost In Pain
    March 25, 2005
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    i really liked this poem. especially the emotionexpressed in it, i could really relate to it. nice job


  • infinite spirit
    March 4, 2005
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    i liked this poem. its sad, but not too sappy. very expressive. great job!