Years ago my name was new birth,
Mothers smile, fathers pride,
Months go by, tears came from my baby eyes,
Mothers restless, fathers beat,
Soon enough my name becomes misunderstood,
Mother cries, fathers gone where is he?
Later years my name becomes young child,
Growing up with someone new in mothers life,
Missing my father, wondering still where hes gone,
Later days my name is known as first day,
Kindergarten awaits,
A smile on my face, tears on moms,
Coming home from my first day, Friends were made,
Can't wait till tomorrow and the day after,
Years still to come,
Scrapes and cuts, bruises and scars, riding bikes, falling down, moving from time,to time,
Today my name is depressed,
Sad, hating life, original teen,
In my dreams my name has been hope and love still to come,
Wishing for another day, only with happy thoughts with smiles on my face,
Some day my name will be married father,
Loving my wife and children together with them forever,
Happy at last, watching them grow up differently then me,
After years of love given to them,
Years will pass, and my name will become death,
But ending with love and peace and glad to have lived.
Author notes
I wrote this for my ca2 class. We had to take a bunch of my name was my name is my name will be blah blah all that and i just wrote this its okay..
Written March 4th, 2005
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Great poem Josh! Keep up the good work. Love you.
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Well...Josh..this is interesting and amazing. I like the concept you used to create this well written write. You have so much talent and creativity Josh...keep up the great work.
LIZ -
This is simply and complexly amazing.
*GameGodess -
BEAUTIFUL
FUCKING BEAUTIFUL
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Never looked at life in this light but so glad that you did, so I was able to read it.. You have put quite the meaning to life from beginning to end.
Great write, and one predicting the future.. Keep smiling.. Hugs Lori
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WoW that was great! Like always I loved it. This is really great. Keep up the good work.
Love you tonz
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Hey it is me again!!! Yippy, u juss cant get rid of me! lol
THis is a good poem...u read it to me and worked on it while i was on the phone with you!!! Like I said...it is very good! I love to read your work!!! U R so good!
Willa is shoving chips into my mouth!!! LOL
I'mma go -K- I love you!! -
I really enjoyed this poem about birth, and youth, and teenage years, and twentys, and getting older, and pension age, and death
encompossed the whole range really dear. thank you very mucho please cheers!!
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