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ALLEGRA-GRANT

--A ll the love I give.
--L ooks never enough.
--L ove doesn't describe the feelings you bring me.
--E vil love is because the injustice it brings you.
~-G ood my intentions are as I ask you to.
~-R ealize my heart is yours.
~-A lways and forever.
~ N ever can my heart be an others.
~ T aken it is, by your love.


My Love's name is Allegra and mine is Grant.

Author notes

This is really sucky but I dont feel like paying attention in class so I typed this so it looks like I'm actually doing some work. And I would have nothing better to think about than my love.
Written March 4th, 2005

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  • sweetypie101
    March 6, 2005
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    Awesome-o

    (sorry baby, i know i suck at acrostics... but this seemed appropriate ... Love you forever....)
    *~YOURS~*

  • sweetypie101
    March 6, 2005
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    I always wish that i could find a way to

    L-et my love show for you.
    O-ne devotion for eternity.
    V-ulnerability that scares me to death but
    E-very motion bringing me closer to

    Y-ou and your perfection.
    O-ne passion forever, My
    U-nconditional Love.

  • poof
    March 5, 2005
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    mushy-yet i still like:)

    another not an other. lol. its sweet!i like the message to her, and im sure she does too.