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My Love

You brighten my day,
as you speak to my heart.
Depression fades,
as I stare in your eyes.
Your beauty overpowers my stress.
Your voice soothes my soul.
When your in my arms,
I radiate pleasure
In this moment,
I'm reminded,
the luck I posses.
The odds of winning your heart are slim to none.
But shockingly,
it seems I won.

Author notes

This poem is really sucky but so is the English class I'm in right now. I'm super bored and thinking about my beautiful so just started typing and ended up with this.
Written March 4th, 2005

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  • sweetypie101
    March 4, 2005
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    Gorgeous

    beautiful my love... the ending is wonderful... it fit perfectly and is totally true