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Forever and Finale Goodbye

For many years
I will love you
And it will never die

You are my friend and lover
Please never hurt us
Never make us cry

I will forever love you
But if you do
That will be

My forever and Finale goodbye

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Written March 4th, 2005

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  • LuckyRainbow
    March 4, 2005
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    I appreciate all the comments and i went through alot and it motivated me to write this poem and again thank you so much

  • babyguhl420
    March 4, 2005
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    wow this poem gave me goosebumps, i feel the same way, very good poem.

  • Darkshadow353
    March 4, 2005
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    great love poem, love the first line