It seems that it was not so long ago
That someone new showed up to chat with me.
She shared some things she thought that I should know
About her unborn child and whether she
Could be the mother that her child deserved.
Her doubt-filled mind was often forced to tears.
The turmoil in her life had her unnerved,
And daily filled her with those foolish fears,
Until at last she found an inner will,
That swept away the tears and baseless doubt,
And helped her daily cope with life until
A girl named Kara chose to come on out.
A midnight case of cramps - a hurried call,
Brought pain filled hours – then a baby’s bawl.
Author notes
Hey grandaughter - just thought I'd write this one for you. Hope you like it. And, Kara Lynn sure does have a beautiful mommy!!
Written March 3rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- ♥ A Miracle Of Hope ♥ by pattyann4500.
500 points, ended March 8, 2005, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh, Kirby, this is so sweet and definitely deserved the trophy! I'm sorry I've been ill and unable to take part in the judging; however, it seems the group did quite well without me!
Congratulations! Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ
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What a beautiful and kind tribute to both mother and baby. I recall the uncertain feelings even now after my girls are grown. Much love and goodness in these lines. A warm and wonderful piece.
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This is cute, sweet and funny. You have written a very nice tribute here. Good job and good luck in this contest. God Bless, Penny
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This was a truly amazing tribute. I really think you did a good job summing up the doubt that all new mothers feel, mal included. But, you're right. She will, no doubt, be a great mother. Kara is blessed to have her and Mal is blessed to have you
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Paul this is so beautiful and a wondeful tribute to Mal. Im sure she loves this Your a great friend, dont ever change the way you are
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Paul, paul, paul...this is amazing! This is so sweet. And cute. I love it soo much!
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Beth,
I guess if the poem is sweet, it's because the subject of the poem is so sweet - and amazing and a whole lot of other adjectives that I could use. Just glad I know her and all of you and am able to write about it.
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Tyler,
Thanks so much. Mal's a sweetie. I've met so many great people here at AP and I've told you before that you're just such a wonderful blessing to talk with, full of joy and humor and warmth. Thanks again,
Paul -
Malzy,
Nothing much I can say, grandaughter. It's just a joy to be around you and now Kara. You've been a blessing to my life each and every day I've known you and I pray it continues for a long, long time to come.
Love ya right back,
Grampa Paul -
Patricia,
Knowing Mal and anticipating Kara's birth have been just a wonderful experience for me - you well know what a great young lady she is and, as her cousin Layla says, what an amazing mother she is and will continue to be. That I've had a small part in the whole process is a joy and a priviledge that I wouldn't trade for anything. Thanks again.
Paul -
Thanks for the very kind comments about my poem for Mal. She's a very, very special young lady and I'm priviledged to know her and be a small part of her life. It just seems a shame to me if being kind is thought to be "unusual" as the world could be a much different place with just a little more kindness here and there.
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Oh Dad! You have brought me to tears. I told myself I wouldn't cry while helping judging this contest....and you haven't helped me keep that strength! LOL! I loved this; you have done wonderful with Mal. I know that she had her days of turmoil and confussion, but it seems you have helped her through that. You are the best grampa and dad anyone could ask for! This was wonderful; I just can't say enough about how good this is. I loved it! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
Hugs
Jess -
congratulations to mal.paul you are such a breathe of fresh air.i read your works and i especially love your sonnets,but i must tell you that the aura of this write makes even your best sonnet pail in comparison.you have given so much to one who may have well been truly lost had you not extended to her your hand of kindness and the comfort of your heart.i don't know you like some others do,but i do know that what motivates you to be such a humanitarian should be bottled and marketed so that others would be privy to the same hope that you brought to mal.congrats to you too,grandpa.
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you are such a great person Paul...i can tell even in the short time that i've known you that you will give till you have nothing left you are just that kinda person...i'm glad i met you on here...you did a beautiful job of this poem and i just wanna say congrats to Mal on your beautiful baby girl...good luck in the contest and God Bless
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WOW Paul... This poem is so sweet... It is one of the best tribute poems I have read!!! It is really beautiful!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
Patty
I would like to say that if it werent for Paul I wouldve gone insane a long time ago. Hes supported me in so many ways. Hes amazing and just the more we learn about each other we learn about ourselves. And I can say so many things about Paul but thatd take up so much space maybe 400 pages or so!
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Paul, you have been such a wonderful friend and confidant to Mal for awhile now, and you have seen her blossom from a frightened child to a more confident young woman. She is now truly grown.
With the birth of her dear, sweet little girl, Mal has become much stronger and more confident. Your poem to her is lovely and a delight to read. The closeness the two of you share is remarkable, and I applaud your for being such a wonderful mentor to such a sweet young woman. Hugs, Patricia -
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I dont even know where to start on this one. Youve written poems about me and to me before but you hit the nail right on the head with this one grandpa. I know not many things will change now but the fact that this is my child really changes my point of view on a lot of things. She is mine, I will raise her as best as I can. One thing I learned and sadly not from my own parents but from you is one thing that I need to do is love this child, not a love that goes away and comes to whenever I feel like it but an unconditional love. Thank you for being here for me, thank you for caring so much for I would still have those doubts lingering in my mind doubts which you have helped me erase. I love you.
Mal
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