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In the Moonlight

I want to hold onto you tight
As we glide across the floor
In each other’s arms in the moonlight.

Hand in hand,
Your hazel eyes locked onto mine,
Sweet lips unite,
As we dance in the moonlight.

A lovers embrace
As sweet lips unite,
Feet dancing across the floor,
Arms locked tight
I fight to keep dancing,
Your kiss makes me weak
As we glide across the floor in the moonlight.

Author notes

i wrote this today for my boyfriend,enjoy.
Written March 3rd, 2005

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  • YourSilentTear
    August 9, 2005
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    I like it, it sounds like a dream... it makes me wish I was dressed up dancing with a lover... good work

  • MoNiK
    March 5, 2005
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    i liked the poem...its full of passion...nice imagery...props...keep ur head up.. ...