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photographer bile

zoom in.click.anorexic.
bruised lips.bite marks.
bloody thigh, calling sharks.
glass.cut.broken mask.
sad.alone.purest task.
question truth.abuse.
first love.addict of...

and who are they?
you say they know my name?
yea right, babe,
take a ciggarette break
suck it all the way down
put it out.

you put me out every time
like a siamese, don't question my authority
unwell I know you like the rain
I know you won't be tamed
but darling, take a break
like an imaginary friend. your threats are only in my head.

it isn't real
  this can't be my still life
pommegranite and the Eve
who knew. she was just like me and you
gnosis...like gnosis
take a picture. she is skin and bones

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Written March 3rd, 2005

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  • Limp
    March 3, 2005
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    wow, powerfull poem. Scary in places.