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You Are

You
are the
voice in the
wind, caressing
me

You
are the
touch of the
sun, warming my
skin

The
singing
of sweet chimes
when I hear your
voice

Sweet
angel's
voices sing
from passion and
love

As
sweet as
passion fruit
when I drink you
up

You
are my
shining star
The love of my
life

Author notes

The second last lanturne was inspired by GauArrowny.
Written March 3rd, 2005

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 23, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words and good luck with judging.

  • americanrebel
    April 23, 2005
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    good

    this is very nice you have compared his love to other things good luck with teh contest

  • GauArrowny
    March 3, 2005
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    When I read that stanza, I thought of that ... I love this also. It's so sweet and stuff that I can't explain. You are a wonderful writer and person and girlfriend and lover and I shoud stop ...
    *applauds*