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yeah i know its all one sentance, but thats what i like about it. its different and its me just venting about how our soceity is messed up. if you really look at it, the sentance makes sense which is cool, haha. but yeah i got the title because our society is, in a sense, killing ourselves because we are just allowing ourselves to br brainwashed and we just follow in line. so through these actions and not taking a stand, we are hypothetically killing ourselves. if you don't get anything, just ask 
Written March 3rd, 2005
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Wow, that's quite a rant. I can't even imagine trying to say that in one breath.
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Glad to see that the "." key on your pc wasn't actually broken. As to form, your sentence has a nice fast paced read speed that neither bores nor confuses, I usually have difficulty being understood without mile long sentences. You also do very well with tone and inflection, It is nice to read emotions in your meter and vowel tones. Either you have lots of practice, or you have a naturally expressive writing style, either way it was a pleasure to read.
As to content, I too have written my share of 'relevent' writes and I think it is every talented author's responsibility to speak out for their beliefs. The time is at hand when words like liberty and freedom are fast being redefined. If enough small voices are raised perhapse they will not as easily be silenced. Keep the faith!
Peace always,
~RJ~


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