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Intill You See

If only you could see in my eyes
What you mean to me.
maybe everything whould change
and you whould understand
That i loved you.
But you didnt love me.
I watched you pay more attention
To your Gutair
But you loved me when were alone
You let them make your choices.
Yet i dont understand why
Arnt you a Big boy?
You are 17.
But that doesnt count.
I guess you never cared.
If only you saw what i see in my eyes
You whould change your ways
and Be a man
not a Boy
I guess we will never be togther agian
Cause you cant see what i see.
And intill you do.
I will sit in the Shadows.
Hopeing for the day.
You see what i see!

Author notes

Another Poem that came at the top of my head. When i thought about me and my ex boyfriend. I know it Prob sucks but i needed to write
Written March 3rd, 2005

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  • Crazi Beautyful
    March 9, 2005
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    i love this poem it wont lemme applaud i used up all my thigny mabobers


  • Crazi Beautyful
    March 9, 2005
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    i oh my goodness !!!!! this reminds me of my boyfriend!!! u have got to read " my stoner boi " i think ull be able to relate ..just replace the word joint with quitar okay hahah ..