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Please Mom

Mom, I don't understand
Why wont you come home?
I know dad still loves you
and you love him don't you?
Have those 16 years been a waste?
Please Mom. Come Home.
I Miss You
I need You To talk to.
When i get a Broken Heart
or Do something wrong
Please mom Come Home.
So we can be a family
I cant stand being alone
Come Home!


"To My Mom"  I Miss You.

Author notes

This is just a poem i wrote at the top of my head. because iam really missing my mom. And since my parents arnt togther its hard. and i havent seen my mom in a while. when before so moved back to canada i whould always see her. Now i only see her on breaks.
MOM I LOVE YOU! Come home.
Written March 3rd, 2005

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  • hisgirl-10
    March 3, 2005
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    wow this is really sad and also moving sometimes i don't relize how thankful i should be because my mom is always there for me thank you for putting that into perpective umm i talk about my mom in a poem call why do you care Great write!