I have this love for someone
That doesn't even know
That every time I speak to him
My face has a heavenly glow
I want to show him how I feel
Show him that this is love, not lust
Prove to him that it's real
I love the way he speaks to me
Holds my head up high
The way he whispers sweet words to me
Although I don't quite understand why
It started out as harmless flirting
But I started to feel so much more
He writes to me and tells me things
And I just bow down to the floor
I love the way he speaks to me
Like I'm an angel from above
How he worships the ground I walk on
Showers me with his never ending love
He holds me up when I'm feeling down
Puts a smile upon my frowning face
Always tells me I'm oh so special
That I show no disgrace
Thank you my dear for showering me with this love
Although I don't deserve a moment of your day
I'll just sit back and watch you patiently
And maybe love will find it's way
Author notes
I hope you enjoyed this everyone and i will comment on some of the other wonderful poems in this contest.
Written March 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Old Fasion Love: by Airborne Ed.
300 points, ended March 4, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Red devil
Thanks bunches for reading my work. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
XOXO
~laura -
Excellent!!!
This gets applause and...well I should be able to applaud it more. This is an excellent poem that has an excellent flow and rhyme, combining to emit it's own energy. Great job and thenks for sharing such a wonderful, heartfelt piece. -
Hidden
Thanks for reading my work.
XOXO
~laura -
Great job
Oh, how we all can relate
You did a great job with writing this. I enjoyed it!
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Doug,
Oh thank you sweetheart! You're so nice to me. Thanks for reading.
XOXO
~laura -
Poetic-soldier,
Thank you for letting me in your contest. Everyone did so well in this contest.
XOXO
~laura
P.S. Thank you for your comment -
Jewel,
Glad you stopped by to read my stuff. Hope you did well in the contest. (i haven't checked it yet)
XOXO
~laura -
Glad you liked, Eddy.
XOXO
~laura -
Jabber,
Thank you for reading my work. I will try to express my feelings more freely for now on.
XOXO
~laura -
Very beautiful, laura, perhaps the best poem of yours to date! I give you applause because it is well deserved!
peace
doug
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Thank you so much for entering
This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem. You can feel something so very special within each line. I would like to thank you so much for entering my contest and wish you good luck. -
This is such heartfelt poem, how someone can touch your heart just with sweet words..I know exactely what you talking about..this was really so soft and tender from your heart..good job and good luck in the contest..check mine for the contest as well when you get chance ,,thank you
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Wow, this is a really sweet, touching poem! Feelings like this don't deserve to be hidden, let it flow my dear, let it flow!
Job well done! Good luck in the contest! -
Well thank you so very much damien for reading my work. I try to have a way with words cuz if i didn't, i wouldn't be writing! LOL (I'm a big joker!) Neways thank you again.
XOXO
~laura -
absolutely amazing once more,,you have a way with words that make you an astounding writer,,keep writing and i will keep reading,cya later!
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Thank you my dear pimp. HAHA Thanks for the kind words dear.
~laura -
Nice Work
Oh my god! That poem is so beautiful. I think who I know who you are talking about. It is very creative and lovely. Keep up the good work. -
Oh thank you mum for your ever oh so kind words to me. You are a wonderful writer also, and i only learn from the best.
XOXO
~laura -
Laura....my dear....this is soo beautiful.
You have conveyed some nice emotion and imagery within the flowing words of this write.
You are such a wonderful writer...I love to read your work.
Good Luck.
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