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Sleepy Meatball

eyelids descend
head nods
snaps up

blnkblinkblink

muscles strain
caffeine deficient
should have finished the coffee
sun's too bright
eyes cross
and strain

blinkblinkblink

nails in flesh
minty mouth
lashes stick together
pull---and---open
vision blurs over
dizzy head spins
the mind falls over
rolls down the hill
and sits behind a bush
like a meatball

Author notes

I tried something a little different here. I wrote this while I was in psychology and about to fall asleep. The meatball part comes from an old kids' rhyme type thingy.
Written March 3rd, 2005

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  • PhEoNyx
    March 3, 2005
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    goodie

    I saw no track of direction but the meatball at the end definately lightened the mood and kinda made me laugh.

  • Nikki Gurl
    March 3, 2005
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    this is very interesting..but at least it's funny!