The stars aren't shining tonight...
My heart beats in confusion
As your eyes see into my soul
Feeling naked in your presence
Contemplating what I see in your eyes...
Protection, manipulation, disgust, confusion
Not sure how to explain myself.
Afraid you won't except me...
Try to change who I am
I'll swallow my pride,
Explain myself, explain my life...
Except me or say Goodbye
Author notes
Written March 2nd, 2005
A contest entry
- The Wonders And Sorrows Of Love by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended March 16, 2005, 27 entries
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Very nice. I loved it. Flowed very well. Great job and good luck in the contest,
~Fiona~
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I like this. A lot of emotion and I get this. I can relate. It was very well written by the way. Okay, I gotta go. It is worth reading at least one more time before I go. Later.
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nice i like it very much and i think i can relate kinda
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pretty good man, alot of emotion in those words, kinda like i can nearly hearr u say them, very nice write, unique style over al u did a great job man, enjoyed it alot
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