Whispers of Love
W hen you whisper in my ear such
H appiness fills my heart my love,
I tingle all over when you speak,
S oftly I whisper your name. slowly
P lacing my arms around you, I feel
E very nerve in my body come alive.
R eaching up with my lips we kiss; oh
S o tenderly at first, our lips melt.
O ur hearts beat as one, we embrace
F ever races through every nerve.
L ove grew that night from this kiss
O pening our emotions to love.
V isions of the two of us together
E ntering into marital bliss.
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Written March 2nd, 2005
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it makes you think of your first kiss with that special someone.i like the way the lines continue and how you are able to break in the right place to make the beginning line for the acrostic.it is very creative.
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Hi there,
This was a great write. It was interesting to read. Keep up the great work.
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Blue moon -
Thanks Jess, it's so sweet of you,we will get to chat over the week end Jess
Love Jenn 
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aaawwwwweeee ... that is so sweet. its sooo good! i love it. i REALLY do, if u werent already on my favorites, you would be now ... i really love this. it is like every girls dream come true. good job!
Jessie -
Thank you AJ for your great comment, good luck to you also Jenn
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Hey Jen, this is absolutely wonderful, I loved the acrostic..you did great job with the style, the words and the romance in this piece..you are very talented..good job
love from AJ -
Good Luck
A very romantic poem written is a lovley style. Your poerty possesses such beauty, love, and so much more than I can say. I wish you good luck in my contest. -
Beautifully written poem.
Filled with the tenderness of love and the special feelings that evolve from being with such a special person. This feels and sounds as though it was written straight from your heart.
A job well done, good luck in the contest with this poem.
Sapphire
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