why have you forsaken me?
why have you taken my life from me?
why do I have to live in stress?
while others live in excess
what have I done to you?
what did they do for you?
why do I have to live a scarred life?
when they live in perfect bliss
what do I have to do to make it all right again?
what do I have to do?
I will do anything
just give me my life back
what do I have to do for you?
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Written March 2nd, 2005
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i like this. i can relate. what i like about this is that for those of us that can relate to it can aim it towards anyone, it could have a different meaning to each reader. good job. keep writing. -chelsea
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great job, i really like this, best of luck in the contest thank you so much for entering!
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awsome
wow awsome great job i can relate to this totaly and i bet alot of others can too great job keep it up -
i think i mostly understand this poem, and yea i kinda suspected that this is how you feel... sometimes i see that kinda stuff, i like this poem bestest, but ur other poem is coolio too though
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i like this one better then the last although it kinda confuses me too...good poem, byez!
~Karinn
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this is good brandy but i just dont understand but oh well
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I like this poem. I have felt something along the lines in the poem at some point in the past.
I like the line:
"what have i done to you"
And, the lines:
"why do i have to live a scarred life
when they live in perfect bliss"
Sometimes it's hard to understand why people do things to others and end up making their lives miserable when the people they do those kinds of things do never did them any wrong.
I liked this poem. Good write.
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