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So CoFuSeD

This world is a confuse.
So many things a blur.
Many scrambled words

All day long I sit and think
Of what to do with you.
What do you want me to?

I feel lost and scared
whether you want me or not
So what do you want?


So tell me
I'M CONFUSED!

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Written March 2nd, 2005

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  • babyguhl420
    March 7, 2005
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    i like this piece cuz many girls can relate to this, it's very well written, why can't guys show some sign of what their feeling, it's so easy for us to set ourselves up to get hury this is very wll written and very good. great job keep up the good work.


  • Nikki Durant
    March 5, 2005
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    beautiful. I like this piece because it is very easy to relate to. I had the very same situation for a long time with one particular person and so it is understandable how one can be comfused by such a relationship. I like how you mixed up your words a bit to line up with the poem, like in the line, "This world is a confuse.
    So many things a blur.
    Many scrambled words" This was a clever way to make an emphasis on the chaos and confusion that many relationships entail. Very nice.


  • evie28
    March 2, 2005
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    O MY GOOD GOD!!!! this is :| woah I...I ... woah!!!!!!
    Pffff!!! its its ,its soooo amazing good! short and perfect! woah no words for it..! U exactly write down my thoughts!! GREAT job!!!! Keep it up!! ^byee byee^