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I loved you Mommy

I cant wait to see you mommy
Will I be a girl or a boy you name Tommy
We'll have so much fun together
And we'll stay close forever
I cant wait to see everything
Maybe I'll even be able to sing

Ouch what is that mommy?
Mommy get it away from me
Mommy make them stop this pain
Mommy are you insane
Mommy I really did love you
But the question is why didn't you love me too?

Author notes

I am really against abortion... I dont think its right that somebody can create a child but cant take enough responsibility to take care of what they created.
Written March 2nd, 2005

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  • Akasha2379
    September 19, 2005
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    amber this has nothing to do with your poem.. but sweetheart you said that if josh ever hurt me that you'd kill him...so go kill him anyways i love you to death and i misserzz you way too much..catch ya later

  • Cutie wit the Butie
    June 3, 2005
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    Amber that was great...I love the poem and it's sad how ppl abort lil babies I mean what did they ever do to you...?? But anyways great job..!! Keep up the good work!


  • xYouleftmebehind
    May 17, 2005
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    Aww.. Thats cute.. It's sad.. But cute.. :-) We need to hang out soon.. Later
    xDanielle


  • lymabn
    April 25, 2005
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    this poem makes me sad, i was recently put in a situation where i had to make the choice to terminate my pregnany, im not happy i did it but considering the circumstances i couldn't live my life knowing what had caused my baby to become who he/she would ahve been. great write tho


  • teamodios
    March 3, 2005
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    amber, keep it up, i knew as soon as i read the two lines you chose to put under the title what this would be about, so that totally drew me in. you know where i stand on this issue, i love ya girl! great job! keep 'em comin, okay?
    SUsie

  • JesusFreak09
    March 2, 2005
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    I agree with you Amber, abortion is wrong, its considered murder, who in the right mind could kill such a prized possession...A baby is a gift from God, why kill a gift from God!?
    -Kayla

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