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Filling the Void

I can see such sites from here!
The tops of peoples' heads.
How magnificent!
How beautiful!
The joy I feel!
The emptiness filled.
I feel the wind of destiny blow through my tangled hair
Until I am forced to hold on tighter.
I must not let go!
I must not fall!
Oh, the peace finally realized,

                         Here on your shoulders.

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Written March 2nd, 2005

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