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Life Fades Away

Life is so horrible.
Your life fades away
Time marches on
Problems go away

I see the look in you eyes
And I wont stand and watch you die away

You lie through your teeth
Saying everything is fine.

I told you I wouldn't come
But I came anyway.

Reading you suicide note
As you bleed away
Watching it all fade away

I can't be their for you
I only will be
If you call

I can't watch you die away
As you watch it all fade away

Problems go away
As time marches on

I can't watch you fade away
As you throw it all away.




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Jackie, I know how you say your life is so horrible. And I know life isn't fair to you. But your problems will go away. I know it doesnt seem like it now, but killing yourself wont solve anything.

I cant be their for you, unless you call me.

I love you. Your Mom loves you, your sister loves you, too. I'm glad you're ok.
Written March 1st, 2005

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  • Unique
    March 2, 2005
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    Wow, this sounds so close to home. Perfectly healthy souls dying and forgetting what life is about. This was great it had a certain something about it, I can't find a word for it, but this write touched my heart. Keep up the good work--Ann