Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Vanilla Lanka Witch

Vanilla Lanka Witch
rose, weeping pearls and salt queens
shivering with thorn desire
dreams which dissolve into gypsy feathers and cigarettes
arms electric cadaverous, bruised but still a milky ivory
tangled hair girl dances, spinning in the wind fey
hot roaring memories rush into deep scarred wings, past wishes
crackling fires of pain drum naked with a sorrowed fragrance
dreams of the secret kiss pure swollen and bright
searching for the music angel goddess that is her heart
Lanka Witch blinds the vanilla sky

Author notes

This poem was inspired by the Weetzie Bat series by Francesca Lia Block...

Written March 1st, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • lifes torment
    March 29, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    OMG!! I LOVE that series and this goes with it so beautifully! WOW! I wrote a poem based on a quote by her. She is very...IDK...She gives me a lot of things to think about. This is BEAUTIFUL! Oh, I'm so excited I found someone who likes her, too...Lol. Ballisimo! (sp?) I'm done now. =)
    -kayla=/

  • marrow
    March 24, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Wow. I am almost blinded by the colorful images in which you have sent me. You have so intricately designed this poem. I am glad that it didn't run on too long like many poems do. With somuch pizzaz you needed to tune down the overall content.. which you did. Awesome job.

    Justin

  • GoldenHope
    March 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    yay its the lanka witch one! weeetzie! very flowing, really good...
    ---<3 Jess


  • DarlingStac
    March 1, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    this is really good! i loved it.. wow!!... i mean the words were amazing(i have a word fetish)... and it flowed so well...great great write.. i loved this... wow!...thats all i can say..but it deserve muhc more... great job...xoxo stac