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You dont even know me

I'm sick of this
The way you treat me every time I miss

You don't know anything about me
not even what I wanna be

I want to work with children
And help them grow to be good men and women

How can you say "that's my daughter"
When what you should really say is "I don't even know her"

My love for you is so deep
But I'm sick of crying myself to sleep

I just want you to love me for me
But I guess that's too much to ask and it'll never be.

Author notes

I know it kinda sux but I wrote it in like 5 mins and thats probably why... it pretty much explains itself if ur one of the ppl that actually know me...
Written February 28th, 2005

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  • Cutie wit the Butie
    June 3, 2005
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    Great piece amber I will be prayin for ya!! Love ya!!

  • troubled-love22
    April 3, 2005
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    thanx!!


  • lovestinks
    April 3, 2005
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    oh i can relate to this one... damn... it hits SO close to home for me... parents these days. i dont even know what to say besides i really do like this, and that its real. - thanx for sharing


  • teamodios
    March 2, 2005
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    Hey Sweetie. Yeah, this is an emotional piece. Great way to express yourself. I'll be prayin for you, you know that right? Pray for me, too, will you? I'd greatly appreciate it. Love ya.
    Susie

  • JesusFreak09
    March 1, 2005
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    Aww Amber,I didn't know something was wrong! I will prayin for ya hun, i hope everything goes ok, you know my number if u need me for anything...love ya!
    -Loser

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