While you rape my mind,
peace where can i find,
a home a place be safe be safe,
no face my hands you bind.
Hit me you will pay,
these demons i must slay,
break me down a fall you pound
to my knees this very day.
Crush you pummel me,
snap will i be free,
stomp my soul here is chained
slash god is this me.
How can you do this,
what the fuck is wrong with you,
don't you see me bleeding
broken
staring back
up at you.
The late of night is here,
your presence I do fear,
the cries aloud within around,
help is nowhere near.
This world i cannot bear,
the empty souls do stare
at what was once a bright young boy,
now a shell less fair.
The reaper he does follow,
your heart my eyes so hollow,
the brunt the shriek the shit i'm weak,
this i cannot swallow.
How can you do this,
what the fuck is wrong with you,
don't you see me bleeding
broken
staring back
up at you.
I will not be you,
no matter what you do,
slap scream slit sheen,
i'll laugh right back at you.
Can't you see you already did it,
broke my fucking spirit,
twist broke piss choke,
can't you even feel it.
There's no damage left to make,
no longer can i take,
your fill your want your fate, it's nil,
no child left to shake.
How can you do this,
what the fuck is wrong with you,
don't you see me bleeding
broken
staring back
up at you.
How can you do this,
what the fuck is wrong with you,
don't you see me bleeding
broken
staring back
up at you.
what the fuck,
what the fuck,
what the fuck,
what the fuck
is wrong with you.
what the fuck,
what the fuck,
what the fuck,
what the fuck
is wrong with you.
Author notes
This is like a half song, half poem...i'm not quite sure what you would call it...i felt like i needed to write something last night, and this is what popped out before i could sleep. it's a Jon Davis inspired piece that is 100% fictional 
off to school i go now...
Written March 1st, 2005
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hey babe I love this. It was wonderful. I liked the flow. And read it like a song. Great job you should try to put some music to it and see how it sounds.
mwah
Jen -
Great Changes
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spelling mistakes fixed, last stanza added, two words omitted, one added--it flows better now, methinx
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Hey this is great. I might be fictional for you but it's not for other people. Would make a great song if you happen to be musically inclined. I really liked it.
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a very dark nursery rhyme.
Hello darling, how are you? I liked this, it kept me quite into the write the entire time. However, it could just be me, but I think you have a few spelling mistakes. Could be me though, you could've used it like that for some reason, but check over the write, just to be safe. Anywho, marvantastic.
Hearts,
Leah
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