So thankful for the morning,
So I can see your face.
So thankful for the winter,
And the warmth of your embrace.
So thankful for our hearts,
Filled with love to share.
So thankful for your strength,
And the kind way that you care.
So thankful for your hands,
And the tenderness of your touch.
So thankful for my heart,
That loves you, oh so much
So thankful for my mouth,
That allows me to say,
Having you in my life everyday,
Is the best kind of heaven in every way.
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Written March 1st, 2005
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I love it! Also, thanks for your commewnt. The poem is meaningful to me.
-Megan, MK, Dark -
You did a nice job with this poem, I also would like to thank you for reading Tell me tonight even though you did not leave me a comment. Take care and keep up the good work. Never stop writing....
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yeah sure, i dont mind! So you liked this poem then? inside a hallmark card? how would i come to do that?
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Oh, wow...I might cry. This poem is definitely more like it! As a recently-converted hopeless romantic, I loved to read this piece. I think we've found your niche...love poems. Great job with this. I can't wait until you've written more so I can read them. You're going into my favorites list. Would you mind if I wrote this down as something to read when I'm really missing my boyfriend? I will, of course, put your name at the end. btw, I could totally imagine this being on the inside of a Hallmark card. I know I would buy it.
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This was a very nicely written piece. The rhyming and flow was executed very well. I liked the message within the lines.
Keep penning and welcome to AP!
~ John
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