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We are Happily Floating

right-click for happy happy joy joy background music!

 

 

 

 

We’re happily floating

  in cascading waves

of glistening gossamer

  on this pristine day!

 

Our memories

  are of lovable desires

our amazing love

creates wildfires!

 

My fantasies race

  on the soft moonbeam skies

luminescent dreams

  feature your sapphire eyes!

 

Your sparkling kiss

  in the candy store

a sweet gumdrop

  always better than before;

 

Out in the cold

  and fluffy snow

you warm my heart

  like a hot cupid’s bow...

 

You’re mysterious-

  like intricate tapestries

made of silk

  embroidered with daisies;

 

You growl like a tigress

  I scream in delight

we sit on the rooftop

  watching the starry night...

 

Our troubles drift far,

  far away

this happiness with you

  will never fade!

 


 

 

 

 

 Try again, words to melody:

 

Happily floating

  happily floating

    Happily floating

      happily floating...

 

Happy we float

  cascading waves in the summer

glistening gossamer days;

 

Memories linger

  of those love-worn desires

amazing love flown away!

 

Fantasies,

  soft moonbeams rise

luminescent dreams

  feature your sapphire-studded eyes!

 

Stealing a kiss...

 

Spark-lighting kiss

  in a dim candy aisle

always better than

  better than

so much better than

  the sweet gumdrops

we shared so long ago...

 

Out in the cold

  blowing snow goes a'melting

warming my thawing heart

  like cupid’s heated bow...

 

Mysteries,

  gold tapestries;

silk whispering

  embroidered from a star-lit scene

 

where wildfires rage...

 

Growl like a tigress

  I will scream, so delighted

sitting together on the rooftops

  watching the starry night slip away

down the boulevard into the day ...

 

Troubles drifting with them,

  farthest away,

happiness with you

  will never fade, will never fade,

will never again ever fade!

 

Happily floating

  happily floating

    Happily floating

 

      happily floating

 

Happily floating

 

  happily floating        away...

 


 

 

Author notes

If this isn't happy enough...!
Written February 28th, 2005

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  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 13, 2005
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    This piece gave me a toothache for being sweet I actually had the words being sung in my head to the happy music! I was in a bad mood but how can I be miss grumpy pants after reading something like this..it's just unthinkable! Thanks for the excuse to finally feel positive I have not found one write I didn't like from you..I don't think I ever will!
    -Lis

  • Adam Gellings
    March 3, 2005
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    awesome

    awesome, this is one of my favorite poems ive read on this site, excellant job at capturing an image, relaying it from your mind, to your pen, and eventually to paper, but most importantly your audience, keep up the good work and keep writing.


  • wbiro gold member
    March 2, 2005
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    I like the part where I scream!


  • Maureen silver member
    March 2, 2005
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    Really enjoyed this! Happy, happy, joy, joy!!!

    Congratulations!

    Maureen


  • Barbara gold member
    March 1, 2005
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    aaawwwww.....this is just too sweet, romantic and pure

    Thank you for entering this, and good luck wiht the contest.


  • PonderingPoetess
    February 28, 2005
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    Sweet, romantic, and pure happiness ring through each and every word. A beautifully expressed happiness that we all long to find.


  • B2oH
    February 28, 2005
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    Yah...I think I developed cavities just reading this.

    Prozac?

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