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Arcomage (Jacob)

Always has a pleasant word or smile
Reflects on what his life has been,
Continues to strive towards graduation
On the court all his foul shots go in
Melancholy moods have turned to romance
Answering his prayers, a girl on allpoetry
Great things await for this fine young man
Each day I have seen him grow into maturity

Author notes

Jacob is a fine young man who graduates high school this year. I have cone to care for this young man and wish the best for him. I am so proud to call him my dear friend. You have come so far since we met last summer. God Bless him.
Written February 28th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 2, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Always gives me a smile to come and on and see you have commented on a poem of mine. Take care, Sandu
  • Purplerose
    March 1, 2005
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    Great

    Your poetry always displays a sense of pride and beauty, and every time I read you amaze me. Wonderful work here, your imagery and word choice was powerful and prominent! Impressive! Thanks for sharing!
    Purplerose

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 1, 2005
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    Thank you Ann for the lovely comment. I am finally getting caught up. I am on another web site too now and trying to keep up with reading the bible and the house, there is not enough hours in the day. I went to bed at 11 last night, I couldn't keep my eyes open. Take care, my friend. Thanks again. Jacob has come a long way. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 1, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the nice comment. And yes it has been a blessing and a joy to see how far Jacob has come. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 1, 2005
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    Thank you Mia Donna, (did I ever tell you I love your name) I always love to hear from you. I hope all is going well with you. Take care now, Love, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 1, 2005
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    Thank you Jacob for the nice comment. It was a pleasure to write this for you my friend.Take care. Love, Sandy
  • Arcomage
    March 1, 2005
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    Thank you my dear. I am honoured and privaliged just to know you, let alone have you as a friend. Your words are always beautiful.

  • March 1, 2005
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    Sandy, as always this is so heartfelt coming from you, anyone should be honoured receiving the beauty of your write. I don't know Jabob personally, but he should be overjoyed with your kind words. All the best in the contest, it's lovely and and the best to Jacob in his life's venture wherever his path may lead him, God bless you both, Annie

  • PowerOfLove
    February 28, 2005
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    Beautiful

    A beautiful write Sandy. What a privilege for you that you have been able to see Jacob mature, and see romance enter his life. A lovely dedication. Take care, Heather

  • Gwalinna
    February 28, 2005
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    great job.... what else is there to say. i was amazed. keep writing. and thanks for everything.

    HIDDED
  • Mia Donna
    February 28, 2005
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    Dedications are so cute. I hope he reads this and loves it, which he would if he read it.
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