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O, Bumble Bee! (KJV style!)

O, Bumble Bee!
How dost thou fly?
Thou art so large,
And thous wings art so small.

O, Bumble Bee!
Why art thou two colours?
Why not beest thou one colour?

O, Bumble Bee!
Why dost thou sting?
Thou wouldest be the nicest pet,
if only thou wouldest not sting.

O, Bumble Bee!
Thou art an amazing creature,
All the poets singest of thou.

O, Bumble Bee!
Thou art God's creation.

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Written February 28th, 2005

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  • sk8r chic357
    March 9, 2005
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    o yeah!!! lol lemme chang thet


  • Thunder Space
    March 8, 2005
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    Hehe

    HA! YAY! KJV! Lolishness, that was awesome. But wait... isn't it supposed to be "all the poets SINGEST of thou."? I'm cunfuzzled. Oh, well. It was Bee-utiful. Hehe.

    ~Anna

  • Emilyski
    March 1, 2005
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    DELIGHTFULLY AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is gotta be my favorite poem of yours!!! YAY!!!!!
    emily