O, Bumble Bee!
How do you fly?
Your wings are so fragile,
Your body so big.
O, Bumble Bee!
Why are you black and yellow?
Why not just yellow?
Or just black?
O, Bumble Bee!
Why do you sting?
You'd be the best little pet,
If only you'd not sting!
O, Bumble Bee!
You are an amazing creature,
All the poets sing of you.
O, Bumble Bee!
God's creature.
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Written February 28th, 2005
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Hey this is really cute and sweet!!! liked you style and i thought that this flowed really well!! A nice light, enjoyable read! Great job
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Yes, whimsical is quite the word for this. Brilliant whimsy. Really fun to read. I really liked it.
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Me and bumblebees don't like one another after a run in!!!!!!!!!!! I feel you need a little help with your flow, other than that I love the write. Its light hearted and whimsical.
Rose
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bumblebees kick ass. u should make a dragonfly poem too, cause they kick ass too, or maybe one about butterflies...let me know if you do
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I like bees too. They're amazing little creatures. They're not suppos to be able to fly another reason to believe there is a creator. -
Hehe. Nice. I like bumble bees. They rawk. Except for the sting.
Great poem, by the way. I smiled. 
~Anna
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Your right. If only it didn't sting. Good one.
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