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His Being is so "other" than us that we are always trying to change who He is by renaming Him, putting Him in a perimeter with the earthly law-a convenient box where we can draw some kind of unknown power; My sweet and intimate God is being disdained because of His unique and inexplicable place in the Universe. As the author and finisher of our faith, this amazing thought came to me (kindly given from the Author Himself!) and I had to share it with you!!
Written October 5th, 2002

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  • Chaith
    January 20, 2003
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    awesome, great rhyming, lovely picture that it paints in a mind :) beautifully written
    |-CSG-|


  • December 18, 2002
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    excellent

    Hmmm .. yes, I'm back to gush again, Cookie! This is such a lovely piece of work, special as always. I love the feeling of awe and humbleness here. I think everyone can identify with that, even if they're not religious people.
    Favourite lines? This is hard with this one, there are so many lovely moments. A special couple:

    'That place of Now or Then'.

    'A clock could hardly count them all'

    Please keep it up!

  • Blaise
    October 22, 2002
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    excellent

    Wow. what a wonderfully written declaration of your strong faith.

  • fredhib
    October 21, 2002
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    excellent

    I not really religous but your poem is so very good and so sincere - I loved it - excellent!


  • October 13, 2002
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    excellent

    Beautiful write. It's great that you have such a strong belief. If only more people realised that what we have and what we are, comes from Him.
    ~Colleen


  • Windsong
    October 12, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    absolutely amazing! i am going through a time in my life when i need to read something like this! thank you! you have no idea how much these words help me!


  • Ladybug
    October 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    this bounces with magnitude of the Lords love and grace that abounds our spirit to be bigger and brighter than all the stars!!
    shine on sweet spirit, an Angel is watching over you....


  • illustriousbuddha
    October 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    :)
    hi Cookie!
    glad that you, like me, are into spirituality
    :)
    i enjoyed this
    ~
    my personal view of God is that God is a loving, creative, all-encompassing force that is genderless, and that is part and parcel of everything and everyone, so that we are ONE; our souls are individualized packets of Godstuff, and the trick of temporarily being human is to discover the godliness within ourselves and others....
    God is all that IS.
    As a drop of ocean water IS ocean,
    I AM THAT
    you are THAT
    we are THAT
    :)
    namaste,
    ~ i b

  • stefa22
    October 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    very nice, wonderful..i love it :)


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    October 6, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Hearts like this never fail to be blessed eternally.


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 6, 2002
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    ((((((((( hugs )))))))))))) Love the tidbits you all put in here. I like it when that happens and it's not just a 'rah-rah-rah'. C'mon..give me more!!! LOL...
    Deep thoughts, prairiegal and dottie!!!whoohooo..and I just came back from church! DOUBLE PORTIONS ARE NEAT!!! LOL
    Edited by CookieZeal on Oct 06.

  • dottie
    October 6, 2002
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    excellent

    grace is here and in it the knowledge of the unknowable unknowing that is still so deep within us..our very cells carry the creator's mark and his energy and his love. Well done.

  • prairiegal gold member
    October 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    this is trully beautiful and very faith filled. As a fellow Christian, I certainly agree with you! God Bless You and always write what He gives, for those writes are never mistakes!!!!!
    thank You.....

  • RobertRichard
    October 5, 2002
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    excellent

    Very faith filled poem
    beautifully done!
    RR


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Beautiful i just loved it
    Come see me too
    Blessings
    Susan~~


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 5, 2002
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    Thank you, NurseChilly!!!

    Thanks for reading, Cherrypies, hon. But I think you took this in an opposite context.*S*

    Glad you had a physical reaction to it anyhow..*shivers*!!!
    Edited by CookieZeal on right now.

  • Cherrypies
    October 5, 2002
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    excellent

    awww sexy poem
    *shivers all over*
    sweet
    x


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    This is so beautiful..brought a lump to my throat...well done girl...~~~GILL~~~xxxx

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