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I'm Broken

Written in 1997

I lay here,
Battered and broken,
My eyes gazing up
At the cloudless sky
As if I were a corpse,
As if you'd killed me.
Laying here battered and broken,
I realize something:
A piece of me is dead.
It died with each punch,
Kick, bite, and scratch
That you delivered.
It died slowly,
And took my love with it.

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Written February 28th, 2005

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