I called the zoo on the telephant
With a suggestion rather relephant—
Perhaps the elephant
Wouldn’t be so smelliphant
If it were wrapped in cellophant.
Author notes
circa 2001; If you like this one, read "An Eye For An Eye" and "Picking Up The Spare". Thanks as always for reading and commenting.
Written October 5th, 2002
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This one is grand! I truly hope you plan to publish a collection of these writings. and to think (sheepish grin) you actually read one of mine.
Edited on Dec 05, 8:25 because 'adjusting punctuation
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LOL. Cute poem. Very imaginative write. -
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Love laughing, even at fruit cakes -tj- -
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Reminds me a bit of Ogden Nash poetry-- very cute, funny and original:) -
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Very silly and good Ilike very much lol
................Janet...................
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I never knew there were so many possibilities!!1 -
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Neato, mosquito! But it's the monkey house that stinks the worst. I'd use tupperware for them! :) The title's great, Worth a Try.
Edited by sock monkey 7 on Oct 06 because 'Why not?'. -
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Hmmm…
I think the twisting syllable you’ve rendered excessively pliable,
And though a tasty nibble – I feel you boarder on the fribble! -
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You Nut
Love y
Susan~~ -
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Hahahahahahaha. So cute, clever too. Hiya Nando! -
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Cute Nando...very cute...~~~GILL~~~~ -
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very very cute :) ~Amy~ -
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Ha! This was great..really cute! -
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hahahahaha like this very much thanks for sharing this fun :)pjs -
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hahahahaha geeze you are insane. :D -Brandon -
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LOL you are one loose screw.....love it keep it up.....
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lol cute!!!
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