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Doo-Dah

doo-dah
there was a time when i felt happy
doo-dah
when i felt pleased
no longer will i fell this way
cause
doo-dah
i'm dead inside
no love is in my heart
doo-dah
can't feel no happiness,love or pleasantness no more
ooh,ooh,ahh
doo-dah
i'm dead inside all this because of you
doo-dah

Author notes

music class and boredom form a weird poem
Written February 28th, 2005

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  • SincerelyMegan
    March 9, 2007
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    Wow.

    My age.
    Yet way ahead of me.
    You have a really good sense of this.


  • February 16, 2007
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    you are good

    give your self some time dont think to much relese your mind


  • Daniela Violin silver member
    March 10, 2005
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    Very Different, Very Good!

    hehe... this is cute (doo-dah)
    you have a lot of talent (doo-dah)
    Keep it up! (doo-dah)
    You'll only get better
    (yes I'm weird...but I don't care)