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Gloss

Gloss over your enamalled voice
With laquered paints
And glittering pens
Until we see no more

Tell your lies
All sickly sweet

Polish and shine
To a bright perfection
The other side
That demon within

Tell your lies
All sickly sweet

Author notes

This isn't to anyone, for anyone, about anyone. I thought of the first line. Added teh rest. Might add more. But I needs must go.
Written February 28th, 2005

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  • forgotten remedy
    June 10, 2005
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    wow. this describes my sister in a shinny kinda way. i really enjoyed this piece! very good write!
    ~mandy~


  • Walking Wounded
    February 28, 2005
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    Polish and shine
    To a bright perfection
    The other side
    That demon within

    Heather rhymed!! sorta. heheh, good job, sis


  • So not a poet
    February 28, 2005
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    I really love the line 'all sickly sweet'. it just tastes really nice, almost bitter. wonderfully crafted language, intriguing.