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He's comming

I see and hear things most people think arnt real
cuts so deep you can hardly feel
the brutaly honest truth of it all
my heart start to break and i begin to fall
what is truth and what is trust
no more love in this world only lust
i close my eyes and lay down to sleep
but can only stay awake and hear the angels weep
i plug my ears to drown out the sound
but he found me agian like a dirty lil hound
he touched my face and wiped away a tear
i sit terrified and quiver in fear
he kisses my cheek and takes my hand
i close my eyes and wake up in a desolet land

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Written February 28th, 2005

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