Sitting in this dark filled room,
Late at night,
Crying again,
Laying on blood stained sheets,
Tears will dry on my cheeks,
Pain will stay,
Love will end,
Alone again,
Fear of them,
Students who judge,
Teachers wonder,
Parents who pretend,
Seeing me happy, clueless they are,
Acting as if they care,
They ask me how or why am I depressed,
Never noticing my pain how real it is,
All the long sleeve shirts that cover the scars on my wrists,
If only they knew how I prayed asking God to take me now,
Before one day,
I take myself.
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Written February 28th, 2005
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ok well im kind of new to this and have no critiques or poems because i just joined like 15 minutes ago but i love this. it is so true and i can soooooo relate to this, as well as most of your writings ! !
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this is so amazing.i,again,can really relate to this.you just did such a great job.ok i know this has nothing to do with the poem but on your profile it says that you live in st.louis,so do i sorry just had to point that out.haha anyway you did a wonderful job.
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Wow! that was powerful, if you havent already you will learn that everyone hurts, some more that others but it will get better even though it seems like it never will, I am living proof of that. I hope you keep up the writting you are truly amazing at expressing your pain.
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This is a good write...I remember you reading this one to me. I like it, but you know how i feel about you writting stuff like this. It worries me!I wish that I could take away all of ur pain and be there next to you and kiss you goodnight!! You will be here in a few days though, so I can YYYYYAAAYYY
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Hey Josh really good poem here. Full of pain I can tell. Kinda reminds me of my new poem I wrote. You should read it LOL. Anyway great poem. I know you say you are okay but I know if you write something like this as is your other poems you must be going through some sort of pain and hurt. For that I am sorry. I know its hard but hold on alright. Hollie and I love ya! Your a good friend and I'm here for ya too if you ever wanna talk or whatever. So good write!!! Oh and Josh... don't you be kissing on MUH Hollie Lol. and you will not be sticking your big head up there when that happens. LoL. Hollie told me what you said. I would applaud this but I ran out!!!! Can you believe that crap??!! :-(
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i love this.. so real... so true.. i can relate ... i love when you said..
Laying on blood stained sheets,
Tears will dry on my cheeks,
Pain will stay,
Love will end,
Alone again,
Fear of them,
that was just so perfectly written... pain will stay love will end alone again.. i know this cycle so well.. its like enscripted to my soul.. anyway.. great job.. keep it up.. peace out.. DreamR
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