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Sweet Dreams

My dear Love
As you sweep into dream
Remember me always
I love you so much
My heart,pounding

Sweet Dreams My Love
May you sleep gentle

Sweet Dreams My Darling
As you slowing sink into slumber

I will think of you always
You linger in my thoughts
Everyday i can hear your voice
I love you so much
And i hope one day you will love me

Sweet Dreams My Sweetheart
May you Dream Sweetly

Sweet Dreams My Honey
As you rest your body

My love will never fade
And my dreams will be of you
Forever you will be there
In my dreams,You wont hurt me
You are My Dream

Sweet Dreams. . . .

Author notes

Is this the kinda one u wanted?....idk.....I just loved the title....i wasnt sure if this is exactly good.....not too used to Love poems....
Written February 27th, 2005

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  • June 12, 2005
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    beatiful, wonderful

    amazing, i couldn't have expressed it any better even though these type of thoughts flow through my veins


  • March 1, 2005
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    This is a very sweet and moving write. Excellent word useage throughout. Nice Job. Good luck to you..

    [ - Stinger Bee - ]


  • xSorrowsxHarmonyx
    February 28, 2005
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    DUDE..its like you entered my brain...took the words i couldnt say...and wrote them down...holey cow chica...you can write w/e you want too...you kick ass...keep it up!!

    ~!KIM!~


  • mystic oceania
    February 28, 2005
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    HEY YOU WROTE AN AWSOME FRICKING POEM HERE!!!!!!!!!!IT REMINDS ME OF NICK!!!!!!!!AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE IT! and you do always say sweet dreams, great job sis
    much love
    ~mystic


  • StoneColdAssassin
    February 27, 2005
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    loved it

    great write sis i would imagine u writing this cuz u ALWAYS say sweet dreams lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it tho


    foever...and always
    forgotten


  • natari
    February 27, 2005
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    Well Written

    A lovely poem and filled with love and very inspiring.Thank you for entering and good luck..Helen

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