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Why Did I Fall

CHORUS:
    You're the one
    The only one I want
    I want you forever
    Be mine forever

VERSE ONE:
    I want to have you
    Are my feelings wrong
    This was never part of my plan
    To fall in love with you

CHORUS:
    You're the one
    The only one I want
    I want you forever
    Be mine forever

VERSE TWO:
    I never thought I would fall for you
    Of all people, you
    My best friend, it's true
    Why did this happen to me

CHORUS:
    You're the one
    The only one I want
    I want you forever
    Be mine forever

CHORUS:
    You're the one
    The only one I want
    I want you forever
    Be mine forever

Author notes

i wrote this when i woke up...i don't know why...

Written February 27th, 2005

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  • LordofGods
    March 31, 2005
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    Guilty as Charge

    Hahahaha, sing it sister. I remmeber the first time I fell inlove with an bird. I'm not gonna say the rest because, *coughs* Too complicated.

  • Alicia-marie
    March 31, 2005
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    thanks brit. i appreciate the advice. i never thought of that ("jealousy"). well, i know that he thinks of me as a sister, because he calls my mom 'mom' and he is always over at my house. i don't know if he'll ever think of me that way.

    alicia:-0

  • good-bye kiss
    March 31, 2005
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    these were good lyrics and i know how you feel i fell in love with my best friend and we were together but not for long he just gave up and forgot about everythng that we were and everything that had happened between us... but you know what i learned the hard way that even if you change the way you look and do everything in the world to try and get him to notice you in more than a friend way he'll probably never see you that way because you too are best friends and it'll probably never work... he probably thinks of you as a sister.. but i wish you the best of luck and the only way he'll come to notice you is if your with someone else because thats when he'll realize that he loves you too and that your the one for him... so my advice pretend that you have moved on and get with someone else so that hes sees that hes not the only one that your looking at...
    ~*~BRIT~*~

  • raynie-night
    February 27, 2005
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    i like it!

  • SToRyOfMyLiFe
    February 27, 2005
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    this is nice i really liked it im like fairy dust i dont usually read stuff like this either but it was a really good write ....great work and keep it up ill be reading more


  • lovelovepalooza.
    February 27, 2005
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    um i dont really read lyrics but i decided to read these because you were on my favorites...and i think these are good. i dont read lyrics because usually they mean a teensy bit more when you can feel them...like when they have misic but yeah...u got luckie.

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