take your time with me
taking anything you wish dear
I am yours to take~
you can take my heart
it is already yours dear
happily given~
you can take my love
you have posessed it always
cherished gift of mine~
you can take my lips
my kisses are just for you
such sweet unison~
you can take my charms
they long only to hold you
tenderly, closely~
you can take my mind
it holds only thoughts of you
blissful reverie~
I am yours to take
totally and completely
I give you myself~
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Written October 4th, 2002
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a sweet heart felt chain of love that softly floats and flutters with smiles from the spirit's wide shine.
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Simple and thoughtful. I loved it. Exactly what everyone feels when they're in love. The repitition of 'you can take' shows how open you must be and willing to give up everything just for him.
Rae -
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oh my,am starting to feel as though i should follow my heart,not my head -
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Beautiful full of tenderness of your heart to Him just lovely:O)Sherry:O) -
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this one is really sweet. very open and playful. i like it. -
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Just beautiful. You are such a sweet person Susan..;)
Love, ~ Ce -
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the sweet and gentle side of love......ty for sharing it -
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THis has a feel of Christina Rosetti about it. That is praise indeed!!! Chris. -
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sweet words of love for somebody special. very nice. -
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Truly sweet and I think this Poem is a lovely poem of love! wonderfully written -
don't touch it!
Truly beautiful:) Nice read:)
Karen -
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Very gentle and soulful....I enjoyed very much. And ty for the read....Mackenzie Rose :)
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