A soul has drifted from this Mortal Plane
Some sirens sounded off so far away
This deathly plane hath killed me once again
So now this soul must leave this dying clay.
The soul begins to travel through the stream
The soul then sits in line to wait for life
This final life is judged by the Supreme
But I am scared of my past human strife.
The soul decides to break off from the line
It quickly falls back down upon the soil
The soul reanimates the body’s mind
I’m once again aware of human toil.
My soul is scared by past mistakes of old
Instead I stay upon the Earth so cold.
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Written February 27th, 2005
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very deep and almost dark- amazing poem- i like your style. hope u are doing well- I haven't talked with you for a while -
Very good poem. I thought that it didn't flow like the rest of your poems, but it was still good. Anyways, You entered this in a contest didn't you. If you did, did you win? Well keep up the good work.
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God hates you... nah only jokelling. well he might but you cant have it all. Was a fabby poem bit deep and heavy but like a thick stew warm and filling. have a happy hannukah -
AMAZING POEM
This was a wonderful poem. Don't worry, God will forgive you of all your wrong doings in life. All you need do is ask Him. This was a pleasure to read. And don;t worry. Take care, Sandy
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Intresting. I think we all feel this way at times/ scared and forsaken. lost in the mist/ I was there and I will probaly be there again/ I know where your coming from! -
I really REALLY like this poem. I'm not sure why, maybe because alot of people, whether they admit to it or not, feel like this, at least a little? I don't know, but once again I just wanted to tell ya you are an awesome writer!
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