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On Age and Love

Chapter 1:

Here we all start
Up, over, up, up, over, over, up, over, up, over, upover.
Five bending digits
Pink and pudgy
Grasping
Reaching for your ear
Your hair
Your nose
Your smile
The little eyes that sparkle
With innocence and love
The youngest, wisest understanding
Possible in the world
So much potential, personality
The voice that is capable of the most piercing wanting cry
Is the same that can melt your heart with a single giggle

Chapter 2:

Author notes

Not even close to finished.
Written February 26th, 2005

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