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Pure and True


Though I wear scars of yesterday,
I do not fear my past.
I've found the strength I need to live,
my soul is free at
last.

Dark nightmares that belonged to me,
are now sweets dreams of color.
No longer do I have the fear,
that I'd become my mother.

I have a heart replete with love,
the Lord has healed my pain.
If it was not because of Him,
I would have gone insane.

Each new day I have the chance,
to start my life again.
I thank the Lord up above,
for He's forgiven my every sin.

I'm a Mom with a tender touch,
the abuse goes on no more.
I'll not allow the darkness in,
the way I did before.

I might have days that aren't just right,
but God will see me through.
Though I've been weak He's always strong,
His love is pure and true.


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Though you are my inspiration, it relates to my life in some  ways.


Written February 26th, 2005

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  • YourBestNightmare69
    March 6, 2005
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    beautiful

    LOVELY!
    perfectly and easily, each line fits together to form such a radiant prayer! uplifting and undeniably soothing your friend will be proud and soothed,
    such talent glows from every word,
    *AlternativeSONG*

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    February 28, 2005
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    A wonderfully hopeful, spirited and reassuring poem! It is written is such flowing meter and rhyme and brings a great deal of feelings with it as well. A very wonderful write. Best of wishes and s... ~genielassie~

  • CelticAngel1605
    February 27, 2005
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    Woah, it seems you've done your research on this girl, unless you share an experience with her. Very powerful and healing standpoint and a fabulous write!!!! I loved it! Great job.

  • cfsnt
    February 27, 2005
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    wow....i really like this. i like how you made it sound like the person overcame her fears and everything


  • M.A.King
    February 27, 2005
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    This is beautiful, full of hope and endurance. Written with a lovely flow. An inspiring work for all who read it.


  • YerTweetyness
    February 27, 2005
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    I will say how this made me feel after the contest.
    Thank you so much for this entry.
    Yertweetyness

  • Little Poet14
    February 27, 2005
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    APPLAUSE, i needed to hear this poem!

    Though I wear scars of yesterday,
    I do not fear my past.
    I've found the strength I need to live,
    my soul is free at last.

    OoOoOo my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This sounds like u are talking about sumone very close to me...!
    I could very well relate to this poem because of her...
    Wonderful poem and beautifully written, as always!

    <3 Always,

    Little Poet14


  • qnhoneybee
    February 27, 2005
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    This is a beautiful and uplifting poem that you have written for Yertweetyness. It shows the stregnth that God gives us and encourages us that He will be there to see us through whatever battles that might be thrown our way. This was a very soothing poem filled with the soothing Spirit of Christ as always!


  • cherche -d -ame
    February 27, 2005
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    Sam...best of luck in this contest. You are wearing your arm on your sleeve as usual...and that makes for such beautiful and inspirational poetry.....it is so great to know that we do not repeat the sins of our parents , but rather take them and repent for them in a way......by making things better in our own lives
    xoxo
    Reenie


  • ShaShay
    February 26, 2005
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    This is a very touching write. I am sorry you had a hard childhood, but you survived and are breaking the chain. That is a wonderful thing. Your flow and meter are great. God bless you, Sam. You bring a lot of messages to light.
    ~~~POO~~~


  • FlawedDestiny
    February 26, 2005
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    This is really great Sam. I really like it! I am inspired by this. Good luck to you in this contest. It's a beauty.
    ~*Destiny*~

  • PennyB
    February 26, 2005
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    This is a really nice poem. It speaks to me of the strength of surviving. Or, perhaps going beyond that into finding a true peace and happiness. good job and good luck! Penny

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